And here I am
Left alone again
Not by choice but by prejudice
Tainted in the false image
Marked by stubborn stains
But this weight is too heavy
And I am drowning now, unable to catch my breath
I have tried, I have given my best
I have realized now, to be a Phoenix is not easy
The chains are too tight and too strong
They may never come off
I”ll just have to keep my head high enough to keep the lungs filled with air
And let it all go with the tears
-pcb
Ah, this sounds rough. Here’s to things looking up. Oh yes, and cry your heart out. It’s healthy for you. It releases harmful chemicals. So I’m all for crying.
🙂
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Haha….me too. That’s what I do in anger. I let my temper wash away with tears… 🙂
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🙂
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This is amazing pcb! I love the rawness in it!
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Thank you so much, sister ❤
Yes, I was purging with emotions the time I wrote this. Tears streaming my face, sadness caging me and hopelessness creeping in.. 😦
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Hope things are much much better for you now sister! there is always the rainbow after the rain 🙂 and the rainbow is this poem, beautiful!
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Thank you so much, love ❤
Your words mean a lot to me.
Yep! It’s all rainbows, sunshine and unicorns in my island of fun these days. 😀
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Welcome sister 💕 yey! Unicorns 🌈
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❤
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Beautifully written.
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Thank you so much, Colline. 🙂
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Nicely done. 🙂
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Thank you! 😁
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🙂
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Let it all go…for sure. Emotional and beautifully written.
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Thank you so much. 😁
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My feelings! ! Loved it
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Thank you so much, Izza 🙂
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I can feel this, I know your pain, much light and peace to you. Michelle
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Thank you so much, Michelle. ❤ Your words mean so much to me.
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There comes many moments where we feel like this, all helpless, all powerless and then we emerge from these times with far more vigor and strength then we imagined we had it in us 🙂 Wonderfully written 🙂
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Thank you so much.
And you are right about this. Sometimes there is a need to brave these circumstances to come all strong and powerful. 😀
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I love the way you create such vivid images, but somewhere in there I feel the ‘phoenix’ still has hope 🙂
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I want the ‘Phoenix’ to have hope, it feels helpless sometimes but it is also very strong… emotionally at least. It is it’s own savior. ❤
Thank you so much. 🙂
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The Phoenix must burn to emerge, remember that.
Hey, I have a challenge for you:
https://scatteredmockingbirds.wordpress.com/2015/08/02/journey-the-quote-and-bonus-poem-challenge-day-1/
Hope to hear from you about it. Take care
-SK
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Thank you so much for nominating me for this very interesting challenge. I love poetry and quotes. I will definitely love doing this.
But I will do it after 16th as I have an exam on that day. 🙂
So, after that. 😀 And I will remember that…the Phoenix thingy. 😉
Take care!
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I did it after many days too, don’t worry. I don’t think it’s time bound. It’s just three days straight. So, whenever(:
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Okay. Thank you again. 😀
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aww hope you had some of your famous chocolate cake for comfort. Beautiful expression too. hope you felt better afterwards.
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Haha…I am trying to raise above eating my feelings. 🙂
Did some introspection and then felt better. 🙂 Thank you! 🙂
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Lol den ur a better person
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Just trying to be. 🙂
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Well that’s good
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